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Proficiency Scores

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Spelling

Your mastery of spelling ensures that your writing is clear, polished, and free of distracting errors. You're a spelling whiz!

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Grammar

Your grammar skills are getting better, with just a few small errors. Keep practicing to improve even more!

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Syntax

You're pretty good at mixing up your sentence styles to keep things interesting. Keep trying different ways to write!

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Point of View

Your point of view stays consistent, making your stories easier to understand. Keep it up!

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Style

You're starting to be creative, but keep practicing to make your writing more interesting.

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Elaboration

Enhance your descriptive language by adding more vivid and relevant details to captivate your reader's imagination.

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Purpose

Sharpen your writing's purpose to ensure your message is explicit and focused, guiding your reader through your narrative.

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Storyline

Strive for a more coherent and consistent storyline by fleshing out your characters, conflicts, and resolutions.

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Technique

Continue experimenting with different writing techniques to find the ones that best amplify your storytelling.

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Sensory Language

Include more sensory details to make your writing more engaging.

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Ms J's Feedback

I'm sorry your essay was lost during this project! That's super frustrating! Please refer back to the rubric for the five paragraph format and submit a revision for a final grade!

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EXTRA CREDIT: Give yourself one point of extra credit for each of the website assets you added to your page: Header photo, square photo, video, quote, hook +_________
 

Add up the numbers on this page. Write your final grade here: _______ / _______

Exit Assessment: On a separate sheet of paper, respond to your grade. 
What did you do well? What do you need to improve?
What areas will you focus on next time to raise your writing score?

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My Scores

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